Wednesday, March 25, 2015

Wanna-be thesis statement

Colonizing Mars

Most of us as children imagined adventures beyond wildest dreams (and modern science), but what if you could actually live one of those fantastic dreams, only down fall is you could never return from the excursion. Mars One mission, expected to take action in 2024, has narrowed down 200,000 applicants, to 100 candidates and will continue narrowed down to 24 people. Out of the thousands of people wanted to go one this one way trip, each had their own reasons and purposes for volunteering for this mission: the spirit of adventure, doing something great with their life, having their names written in history books, and benefiting man-kind.

1 comment:

  1. put a colon after mission before your order of development

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